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Friday, July 6, 2012

A little senary of cloud and sea~ 7/6/2012

Practise drawing some ocean and cloud, needs more work, good start~

6 comments:

  1. Looks nice! I love the atmosphere :)

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    1. thank you very much. The foreground seems a little dark.

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  2. Wow this is very beautiful! I love the brush you are using, too. The grass in the foreground is very nicely handled and I love the texture/colors in the clouds - great job :)

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    1. Thank you very much~ Welcome to critique~

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  3. Nice study, but a few comments:

    Your foreground is a little too loosely defined, and it is rendered with the same amount of detail as the far-middle ground island. I think a scale cue like fence-posts or something could help define that form--which is important because that is most likely where your characters will be walking.

    I love the proper fresnel effect on the water and you keyed your colors well.

    Your silhouettes are pretty, but a little boring. Perhaps a little house on the right part of the picture frame, or stronger shapes might make the design exciting.

    Compositionally I like your tension point on the right side with the island and the foreground mass. One problem I see though is that your sky and horizon run optically as a nearly uninterrupted horizontal line--leading the eye out of the picture frame. I think this could be fixed easily by adjusting the silhouette of the island mountains in the midground.

    Hope it helps!

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    1. It is of GREAT HELP~ Thank you very much for pointing out my problem!! The composition of this picture bares a lot of problem as you point out. It is GREAT!! Thank you very much~

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