A little random collection of animation, illustration, and design.
Looks nice! I love the atmosphere :)
thank you very much. The foreground seems a little dark.
Wow this is very beautiful! I love the brush you are using, too. The grass in the foreground is very nicely handled and I love the texture/colors in the clouds - great job :)
Thank you very much~ Welcome to critique~
Nice study, but a few comments:Your foreground is a little too loosely defined, and it is rendered with the same amount of detail as the far-middle ground island. I think a scale cue like fence-posts or something could help define that form--which is important because that is most likely where your characters will be walking.I love the proper fresnel effect on the water and you keyed your colors well.Your silhouettes are pretty, but a little boring. Perhaps a little house on the right part of the picture frame, or stronger shapes might make the design exciting.Compositionally I like your tension point on the right side with the island and the foreground mass. One problem I see though is that your sky and horizon run optically as a nearly uninterrupted horizontal line--leading the eye out of the picture frame. I think this could be fixed easily by adjusting the silhouette of the island mountains in the midground.Hope it helps!
It is of GREAT HELP~ Thank you very much for pointing out my problem!! The composition of this picture bares a lot of problem as you point out. It is GREAT!! Thank you very much~